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lets call it confusion

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Iloveit
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0 posted 09-07-99 03:43 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

lets call it confusion

but its not, not really,
I know what I want,
I want you.
I want your touch,
my soul has finally found yours,
friends for all time
lovers not yet
or shall I say, yet to be

so why do I call it confusion?
because I am weak
and I know not how to hurt another
who feels the same about me
as I feel about you
and I wonder if it is nothing
but life turning around on me


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Iloveit
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1 posted 09-07-99 03:45 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

gosh I just want to say that there are so many wonderful poems here, I could live here and live happy :-) glad I found you guys!
miriam
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2 posted 09-07-99 04:45 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

welcome iloveit. your poem is great!! you'll make really good friends here i promise. starting with m

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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-07-99 06:55 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to the group

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Iloveit
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4 posted 09-08-99 09:55 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks guys.....I really like it here, I write in spurts usually, nothing for a while then lots....but thanks for the welcome

hugs
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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5 posted 09-08-99 10:39 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Welcome to the forum,
A place that stands alone.
A warm and caring place,
Us poets call our home!
LngJhnAg
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6 posted 09-08-99 10:45 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Hi ya, Lovey

I like this poem. It says a lot about indecision and need, and how they conflict with one another. Very nicely done. I especially liked the way you started out with a simple statement, and then recanted it with a definite statement of need and drive. Very alluring and powerful.

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Iloveit
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7 posted 09-08-99 10:49 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

hey lj, you can analyze my poems any day, you make me sound like I know what I am doing, and hey, I kinda like that lol

big big hugs!
JTF
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8 posted 09-08-99 11:41 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

ROFL @ "you make me sound like I know what I am doing" ... seeing the others you posted I must say it's a real good spurt !
Iloveit
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9 posted 09-08-99 11:51 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well, lol, I never really considered myself a poet, its just my heart pouring out onto the paper, but when Lj describes them, lol, he makes it sound like I thought about it and planned it like that lol
thanks frog, good to see you here
hugs
 
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