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miriam
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since 08-26-99
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0 posted 09-07-99 11:34 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

I wrote down my thoughts, my emotions
You gave me some of your loves sweetest potion.

I gave you all my burdens to carry for a while
You did it, never taking back your smile.

I just recently joined the family
But still, i never want to leave.

Thank you all for taking the time,
To read my lame poetry and rhyme.

I want to be of use
To all that need a boost.

Thank you once again,
For being a great friend.

-turn that frown upside down - miriam

*for some reason, although i am registered under my personal email address my responses have been going to my sisters address. please make sure if and when you write back that you're writing to mina116@yahoo.com, and no one else.

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Lucie
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since 06-20-99
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Houston


1 posted 09-07-99 11:41 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I liked this poem.. good job. And all are welcome here, except maybe that critic guy, cause he was mean! BOOOO down with mean people BOOOO.. hehe
miriam
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glendale,ca.


2 posted 09-07-99 11:44 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

thanks lucie!

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