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i worte this a few years ago and it got published and i got publisher of the year.

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Jeff Smith
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~~~~~~~~~Remembering you~~~~~~~~~~
As I walk through the fields and see the flowers I think of you and your nice warm smile.

As the moonlight shines down on the lake
it reminds me of the pretty glow from your face when I kissed you.

I laid there watching you sleep at night
admiring your nice soft hair.

I know I make you mad and upset,I never meant to cause you any pain I just want to make things right before you walk out of my life for good.

Well you're gone and I'm here all alone
with only my memories of you,
Sometimes I just lay there thinking of you
and all the things we used to do.

Every once and a while I catch myself
smelling your pillow and your nice sent.
© Copyright 1999 Jeff Smith - All Rights Reserved
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Very romantic and wistful and sad.
Say how does someone get published anyway?


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rogen of the night
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Thank you dsnyder for the reply I hope everyone likes it.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~
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I like this,very sad though

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Romantic and sad. I liked it! Thanks!
rogen of the night
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5 posted 09-09-99 01:41 AM       View Profile for rogen of the night   Email rogen of the night   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rogen of the night

Thanks everyone,I wrote it after me and my girlfriend split up.

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The wise man is the storm prays God,not for safety from danger,but for deliverance from fear.It is the storm within which endangers him,not the storm without.
~~Ralh Waldo Emerson~~
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