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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
There is someone, did you know, With a heart as deep as the ocean, And as wild as the fiercest wind. They fear him, did you know His anger they compare to thunder And his hatred has the force of storms They call him evil did you know, For he wears a frown across his soul, And a look like the devil's very own That man loves me, did you know, As gently as the silent rain, And warmer than the constant sun. Someone loves him, did you know With a heart so full of life and joy And as deeply as the starry sky. That someone is I. Angel |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'm glad you two special "someones" have each other! What a sweet poem-what does he think? All that matters is your opinion of this guy, no one else's. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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ERIC2 New Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 3IL, US |
Hi my sweet. And Elizabeth, I think she is the most beautiful person in the whole world. Im not a poet, or even very poetic. This is what she means to me. No light, only sound, from outside there is, Once innocent and loving, long ago as a kid. Through pain and the hurt, that was my life, Brick by Brick, piece by piece, to protect me inside. Rigid and stone, this hard surface shell, As a man I now realize I'm trapped in this hell. For me there was no way, I could see to get out, Then an Angel appeared, through the walls she would shout, “My friend I do care, please trust in my love, I swear Ill protect you, from heaven above”. In my disbelief, I prayed she was true, I'm tortured! I'm trapped! Lord, I beg you! When I heard her voice, she spoke to my soul, Past the armor surrounding, far down in this hole. But as I looked up, this Angel walked through , the walls had no meaning, and to me this was new. Magnificent beauty, her soul was a flame, And at that very moment, my life had then changed. After knowing her long, she began to teach me, I could walk through the walls, to escape easily. Her trust and her kindness, are always there, She's loving and caring, but I know she is scared. She still leads me out, we talk, and spend time, But as soon as it ends, the shell's again mine. I know to the world, my shell is immense But to my sweet Angel, the brick walls now a fence. Then she built a gate, that's straight to my heart, So there'd be no walls, to keep us apart. But I keep those same walls, my once hidden place, To share with my Angel, so she can feel safe. I try to always tell her, that I will be there, To rescue and help her, and that I truly care. This Angel God gave me, I thank everyday, I don't always say it, But I do when I pray. The real me inside, that's freed from this hell Loves his friend, and his darling, this beautiful Angel. [This message has been edited by ERIC2 (edited 09-06-99).] |
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Angel Rand Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 134London UK, and Zurich Switzerland |
Ty Elizabeth for your kind words. I guess he answered your question himself  My Dear THANK YOU. That means so much to me! I love you tons! Your very own Angel |
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ERIC2 New Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 3IL, US |
Hello my darling Angel, No need to thank me, honestly. Its true and I mean every word of it. I love you with all my heart. Eric |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Eric2, that is so sweet. I wish I had someone who worte poetry for me... ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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