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Mike
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0 posted 09-06-99 12:52 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Uncaring
and
unforgiving
in thy
conquest;
unsatiable
in
thy
hunger
to devour all
that
is beautiful.
Curse thee.
Do
not you
realize
the
fire of man
is
not fanned
by
thy winds?
Curse thee.
Thou
may fade
the
garden's petals;
but
seeds of thought
shall
ever be
reborn
from
thy wretched soil.
Curse thee.
Necromancer,
in
thy battle
for
eternal domination
thou
hast
leveled mountains
and
gouged
the
deepest sea;
but
as
the Phoenix,
ever
shall
rise man.
Curse thee.

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-06-99 08:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent Mike! You capture time's curse well! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 09-06-99).]
Denise
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2 posted 09-09-99 08:04 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think this should go back up to the top!
I think it got lost in the shuffle!

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Denise
Severn
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3 posted 09-09-99 08:10 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow, this is great. I love the structure and the archaic language fits so well.
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 09-09-99 08:18 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Hear! Hear! Well Said! Liked the style and the feelings behind it all. Thanks to Lady D for bringing it back to the top.
Denise
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5 posted 09-09-99 08:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

See? I knew it was great!

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Denise
Isis
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6 posted 09-09-99 09:01 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Mike, so sorry I didn't see your poem about time and try to better it, I just did it, then started looking around and there you were.
Forgive me?

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 09-09-99 10:02 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well done Mike....a very nice read indeed!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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