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Lucie
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0 posted 09-06-99 12:01 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Written for Pufalove

Love me or love me not, my new philosophy.
If you donít like the way I look, then just donít look at me.
Father time has had a hand in my new look you see
and mother nature wasnít kind, hit me with gravity.

But the hand that really mattered, is the one that touched my soul
and my body is a temple.. getting God there is my goal.
If your looking at the building and not the foundation at its base.
Then continue in your search my friend.. my templeís not your place.


[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 09-06-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-06-99 12:05 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Lucie ~~~ THIS ROCKS GIRLFRIEND!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Craig
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2 posted 09-06-99 02:03 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

Another great one Lucie, you write so well the words seem to flow so easy.

Got any tips for me?

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Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.



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Lucie
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3 posted 09-06-99 02:34 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Well Craig.. I think in verse..haha.. if someone makes a statement or a comment I just build from there. My friend Pufalove made that comment this morning.. Love me or Love me not.... It took me about 10 min. to write this poem.. some of my poetry shows it only took me a few min, but others, I'm proud to say come from my heart so no matter how long they are or how long they took.. they have feeling! Each is a part of me.. the same as each poem you write is a part of you. a part that I enjoy I might add!
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4 posted 09-06-99 02:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Oh, Lucie! How you shrine!!!!
Lucie
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5 posted 09-06-99 02:39 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

Ohhh Balladeer...Your my hero!!!
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6 posted 09-06-99 08:08 PM       View Profile for Pufalove   Email Pufalove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pufalove

You hit the nail on the head...see what I get for mentioning that I have "just a few sagging areas"! hahahaha...I love it! You never cease to amaze me...cool! I thank God every day for that foundation,too.

ps: One day I will shock you with a come back and maybe even a poem.
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