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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-06-99 11:53 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Come over here,
let me bend your ear
and tell you a story
of love
to rival the choir
of Heaven's desire,
taking flight
on the wings
of a dove.

I know just
what you think,
that one day
you'll blink
and find one day
that I'm gone.
Well, my dear,
never you fear.
You are totally,
helplessly,
wrong.

Who else
puts up
with my moods,
my wigged out views
and shares
their
heart with me?
Only you my one,
desperately true,
love.
I hold
no one above
You.

Your cranky moods
and radiant smile
keep me
all the while,
both
your passion proves.
It is my singular delight
to keep you in sight
as your passion moves
Me.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


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~one voice~
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1 posted 09-06-99 11:57 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Not one poem as spectacular as this one needs a title! It truly makes me smile!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


caroline
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2 posted 09-06-99 12:00 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Excellent as ever, you are, DE. This is so full of warmth...its wonderful.
Elizabeth
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3 posted 09-06-99 12:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I love it, DE, but can't think of a title either...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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4 posted 09-06-99 01:33 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

No title in mind either! But what beauty you have painted here! This was just WONDERFUL! I really loved it!!!! I can't really put into words how this reached out and touched me today! Thanks for sharing it with us all!
Billy
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5 posted 09-06-99 02:42 PM       View Profile for Billy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Billy

Nice job. How about "I won't take flight"
DreamEvil
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6 posted 09-07-99 06:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you my fellow poets. This piece shows how tired I was when I wrote it, eh?

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


7 posted 09-07-99 08:51 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful Dream...what about "Moved by your passion"

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


8 posted 09-07-99 12:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Some things, like love, cannot be bought; and some poems, "perfect", cannot be named.

Well done.
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