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Dr.Moose1
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Illusions once harbored , are tossed on rough seas .
Shored up by ideals , now worn down by degrees .
Time and tides relentless , wear down that which won't comeback .
Understanding of the process , will not stay it's sure attack .
It is futile to resist , a force in constant
motion .
If you would continue to exist , embrace change , become the ocean .

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© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-06-99 10:33 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Keep them coming, sheer pleasure for my eyes..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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Dr.Moose1,
You seemed to have mastered this form.
I give you a thumbs up and a bravo.
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Do we have a master in our mist????
doreen peri
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4 posted 09-26-1999 05:42 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

This is really wonderful. I particularly enjoyed the last two lines... ending with "embrace change, become the ocean". That, my friend, is wisdom! And well-written wisdom, to boot.
 
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