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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Illusions once harbored , are tossed on rough seas . Shored up by ideals , now worn down by degrees . Time and tides relentless , wear down that which won't comeback . Understanding of the process , will not stay it's sure attack . It is futile to resist , a force in constant motion . If you would continue to exist , embrace change , become the ocean . ------------------ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Keep them coming, sheer pleasure for my eyes..  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1, You seemed to have mastered this form. I give you a thumbs up and a bravo. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Do we have a master in our mist???? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is really wonderful. I particularly enjoyed the last two lines... ending with "embrace change, become the ocean". That, my friend, is wisdom! And well-written wisdom, to boot. |
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