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Julie
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Houston, TX


0 posted 09-06-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Julie

(A dedication to my mom who has always been there for me.)

Remember me when your down n' out.
Stuck at home - ready to shout.
On Saturday night feelin' lonely,
Eating a sandwich made of baloney.

Remember me when your heart's in-two.
Our times together - I know are too few.
Recall our time when life was fair,
when children were young and little to care.

Remember me when the memories flood,
Knowing I will always be your blood.
For I am made just like you,
my mommy to you - I am forever due.

Remember me when life makes you mad,
It wasn't long ago n' things weren't so bad.
I made you laugh till you cried,
holding your belly and suddenly sighed.

Remember me in your final hour,
Sweet lil' me who always bought you a flower.
It's with you I long to be,
so close your eyes and Remember Me.




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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson
© Copyright 1999 Julie - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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1 posted 09-06-99 03:14 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Oh, very dear and sweet!! Teary eyed, I am!! That was beautiful!!

Thank You!!

Jusbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
Julie
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Houston, TX


2 posted 09-06-99 03:10 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Here's a tissue for you...
Justbleu

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson
Starith
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since 08-18-99
Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


3 posted 09-06-99 05:47 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Very nice tribute to your mother...I know I always find it hard to say how much I care for my mother...this is a perfect way to express those feelings.

Beautifully done poem.

Also let me welcome you to the forums. I look forward to more of your work.

Star

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Julie
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4 posted 09-06-99 05:55 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Thank you Starith. I really like your statement on your profile.

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson
miriam
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since 08-26-99
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glendale,ca.


5 posted 09-06-99 08:49 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Being a mother can be hard. but by your poem i think your mom has done a great job with you. thank you for opening your heart to us.
Julie
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6 posted 09-06-99 09:00 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

What a sweet sentiment. Thank all of you, for
giving me a place to share.
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