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Some Kind of Love

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TrulY PreciouS
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0 posted 09-06-99 02:17 AM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Some Kind Of Love



My heart was sinking as my beloved was about to leave.

Love is the most important object in my life, I now believe.

What should I do when the one I care about disappears?

How can I live when my heart is flowing with tears?

When is the time to shine; will it be years?



I canąt let go of some one I truly love.

For I knew long ago that you were my angel sent from above.

Should I stop living in the past and think about the present time?

To prove my love, should I commit a crime?

Would that be worth anything just to have you as mine?



Friends say that I deserve better than you.

Even if I leave, my heart will be broken into two.

Is our love true that no powerful force can turn it into a flame of lust?

Is our love too passionate that a fire can not turn it into an ashy dust?

Is our love kind, full of wonderful memories that we have so much trust?



If you only knew, I loved you the most.

You would not pretend as if Iąm a ghost.

Why canąt you say that we have loved each other ever since from the start?

When will you admit to yourself that Iąm the one who belongs in your heart?

Canąt you see that deep inside it is tearing us apart?

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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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1 posted 09-06-99 02:26 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Quite emotional!! Desperation, love, and loss!! So sad!!

Lovely thoughts!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
TrulY PreciouS
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2 posted 09-06-99 02:35 AM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Thanks for those com,pliments Justbleu!! =)

Piccolo04
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3 posted 09-06-99 11:48 AM       View Profile for Piccolo04   Email Piccolo04   Edit/Delete Message      Click to visit Piccolo04's Home Page   View IP for Piccolo04

Very, very good, I've never seen such a good poem like this before. I like how you expressed your emotion in the poem. Keep up the good work.
KiMee
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4 posted 09-06-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for KiMee   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KiMee

I loved the poem! I can tell it came straight from your heart. Great job! hehe
miriam
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5 posted 09-07-99 05:02 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

i don't know what else to say besides WOW!!! i'm taking you back to the top.
TrulY PreciouS
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6 posted 09-07-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Thank you all so much for those wonderful comments! I am glad that you had fun reading my poem. Thank you so much again! =)

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TrulĄ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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7 posted 09-08-99 11:17 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I remember feeling this way. As the whole world is crashing down around you! You have written your thoughts well!
LiLDiZzY
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8 posted 09-09-99 12:37 AM       View Profile for LiLDiZzY   Email LiLDiZzY   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for LiLDiZzY

i love it! i hope to see more good work from you!

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what if I, keep holding on...just maybe you'll see, that I do need you...

I know you probably will never love me too, but from the second I wake up I will never stop thinking about you...
Isis
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9 posted 09-09-99 12:52 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So sad...
I've known that some kind of love for years, and in the end I had to give up on it and him. Now I'm strong enough to look back fondly. You will too....one day....:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


TrulY PreciouS
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10 posted 09-09-99 11:10 PM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Don't worry lildizzy! I will keep on putting my poems here and hope that you will enjoy reading my other poems as well as this one.

Yes Isis... I am getting over this loss and sorrow.

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TrulĄ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



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