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Master
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0 posted 09-06-99 01:06 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Dear star, why is your light so dim
Reflecting in my cup?
Itís filled with hope up to the brim
And faith in every drop
I drink the hope and faith and soon
You canít be seen at all
Dear star, who swept you with a broom
Confess, who made you fall?


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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 09-06-99 01:11 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Something beautiful is lost...why???


Makes me wonder!!!

Point well made!!!

Thank You!!

Jusbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!


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Master
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Actually it was "When hope and faith are not present, dreams cannot be seen." BUt your interpetation was very interesting.
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tell me what you think
 
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