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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-06-99 12:35 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Heartbroken

You came to me like the sun

You were there for me

I don't want you to go

Why do you have to leave

Going away to where you came from

Far away from me

I want you to stay here

But, you can't

You have to leave

Leaving me alone

In my crazy little world



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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Tyke
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A very nice piece to read. I enjoyed it very much but remember it is he who is poor indeed that can or will promise nothing.
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Again, well done justbleu...Boy, you are writing poetry after poetry about that special person aren't you?? GOOD LUCK..

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The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Isis
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Beautiful..it tore at my heart strings.
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