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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-06-99 12:27 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I met a lovely woman just this night.
Just her perfume makes this jaded head spin.
This giddy joy wraps me in new delight.
I think for this one I might give up sin.

I take her home to my place for a change.
That is something I don’t normally do.
She does things for me I did not arrange.
Just dumping this woman would hurt me too.

When we were done she got ready to leave.
She said, “You’re a lousy lover, it’s true.”
“If you thought I’d stay, you’re just so naïve.”
“Don’t leave me”, I cried, “I love you!”

I never gave, I was just a taker.
Now I’m just a lonely ex-heartbreaker.


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caroline
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1 posted 09-06-99 12:41 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You continually amaze me, Dream.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Justbleu
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Wow!! Written well!! Amazing realization portrayed. Thanks!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
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