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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-05-99 09:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

I love you to

She processes the mundane day.
Into priorities.
Shifting slot to slot the care not,
Into categories.

It is a calibration planned,
A regimentation.
Placing items is a time slot,
For consideration.

It is a good plan and it works,
Doing things concisely.
The day flies by in ordered form,
Wrapped and done precisely.

But I am not a memo slip,
To place within a file.
The kiss the peck the hello dear,
Has lost its loving style.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-05-99 10:14 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Life gets too busy, and we get lost in the shuffle. Put on some music and ask her to dance in the middle of an afternoon File the memory under "things to do more often". Seymour I love your writings.

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Severn
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2 posted 09-05-99 10:34 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You know I love your style, Seymour, and you got me again with this one. Monotony - the curse of relationships.
Nan
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3 posted 09-05-99 10:34 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sy is stupendous....
Denise
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4 posted 09-05-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Why not try a nice vacation
-A grand romantic holiday
Might do wonders for frustration
-Just put the filing away!!



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Denise
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5 posted 09-05-99 10:41 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sy, we all get defiled at one time or another.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-06-99 08:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dear Nan, Balladeer, caroline,dsnyder and severn,
The anount of literature placed here is phenomenal I put this poem on before I went to sleep and found it half way down the second page this morning. This site is sometning else. But what I wanted to say is to be praised by my fellow poet is praise indeed. I thank you all a whole bunch.
Denise
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7 posted 09-06-99 08:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

And some of us had to work today! Imagine how much more there would have been if we were all home!

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Denise
Julie
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8 posted 09-07-99 12:26 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

I think when it gets to this it's time to break the rules and break the routine.

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Julie
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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 09-07-99 09:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Just want to say thanks dsnyder and Julie,
breaking the rules does work, thanks.
passing shadows
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good one
 
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