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Open Poetry #2

The Bigger Monster

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-05 09:50 PM

in the deep woods,
where im lost,
im being stalked,
always stalked,
by the past,
what a beast,
no bigger monster,
well maybe one,
called self esteem,
it devours all,
me in the end,
no bodys friend,
no one can love,
what cant love itself,
so very true,that why im through,
alone and confused,
all news is bad news

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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-08 08:12 PM

I can feel the depression in this piece. This is very well written and overflowing with emotion. Very good!

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Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-08 08:36 PM

Self esteem, can be a monster! Been there, done that! But let me tell you something, you are worth it! The world may not always see it but God does. And you were worth the life He paid! You are worth more than you will ever comprehend!

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