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The Bigger Monster

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-05-99 09:50 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

in the deep woods,
where im lost,
im being stalked,
always stalked,
by the past,
what a beast,
no bigger monster,
well maybe one,
called self esteem,
it devours all,
me in the end,
no bodys friend,
no one can love,
what cant love itself,
so very true,that why im through,
alone and confused,
all news is bad news



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I can feel the depression in this piece. This is very well written and overflowing with emotion. Very good!

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Self esteem, can be a monster! Been there, done that! But let me tell you something, you are worth it! The world may not always see it but God does. And you were worth the life He paid! You are worth more than you will ever comprehend!
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