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Star Fairy
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since 08-11-99
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cerritos, ca, usa


0 posted 09-05-99 09:43 PM       View Profile for Star Fairy   Email Star Fairy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy

You took this situation
as a dammed confirmation
of your fearful sensations

and you already felt ready to let go
but reason to leave, you didn't know
now you can use this finally go

You taking all your fears and making them true
Why you hurt so bad, you have no clue
Because it will never matter that I was in love with you

Now you can pack your emotional baggas and go away
You may physically leave my sight but in my heart you will stay
forever and eternity, until my final dying day

I understand you need to leave
I know you can't stand the sight of me
In my dreams and fantasies we will forever be

So take your fears and run away
but remember this last thing I say
My heart's eyes on you will never stray.
090199

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PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
Posts 1829
Aloha, Oregon


1 posted 09-05-99 09:51 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This is a good poem but title wise the only thing I can think of is something like the "Eyes of My Heart". I wish I could be more helpful.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild

Denise
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2 posted 09-05-99 10:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

How about 'Love's Agony' or 'Not Meant To Be'? or maybe 'I'll Miss You'?

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