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Star Fairy
Junior Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 39
cerritos, ca, usa

0 posted 1999-09-05 09:43 PM


You took this situation
as a dammed confirmation
of your fearful sensations

and you already felt ready to let go
but reason to leave, you didn't know
now you can use this finally go

You taking all your fears and making them true
Why you hurt so bad, you have no clue
Because it will never matter that I was in love with you

Now you can pack your emotional baggas and go away
You may physically leave my sight but in my heart you will stay
forever and eternity, until my final dying day

I understand you need to leave
I know you can't stand the sight of me
In my dreams and fantasies we will forever be

So take your fears and run away
but remember this last thing I say
My heart's eyes on you will never stray.
090199

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PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
1 posted 1999-09-05 09:51 PM


This is a good poem but title wise the only thing I can think of is something like the "Eyes of My Heart". I wish I could be more helpful.

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Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-05 10:19 PM


How about 'Love's Agony' or 'Not Meant To Be'? or maybe 'I'll Miss You'?

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Denise

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