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Looking for the Truth...is that a good name?

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Starith
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0 posted 09-05-99 09:18 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Starith

When you look at me,
An odd person you shall see.

For I am not like most you know,
Though I'm not much different from head
to toe.

The difference lies with in,
Hides behind my grin.

To know the truth you must know where it
lies,
Therefore you must look beyond my eyes.

The passage to the soul through the eyes,
That is where the truth lies.

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Denise
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1 posted 09-05-99 11:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

How about 'Can You See?' or 'Where Truth Lies'?

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Denise
Starith
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2 posted 09-05-99 11:13 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Thanks for the suggestions..I wasn't so sure about the name...I can write 'em fairly well (or so I think) but I really can't get with the name thing.

Starith

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Justbleu
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3 posted 09-06-99 01:32 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I love it!! It talked to me quite well!!
Thanks!!

Justbleu




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moonmoon
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I think I'd go for 'where the truth lies' too...well done..

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The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-06-99 09:23 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Starith,
Enjoyed the read, well done.
 
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