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Balladeer
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0 posted 09-05-99 06:29 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

( in a songwriting mood tonight)

I am tired and I am through
With looking for someone to give love to.
Times like this, I feel so blue
Looking for someone to give love to.
Though it could be I'm to blame
All my dreams turn out the same
Nothing more than ballyhoo
Looking for someone to give love to.

At times out there, it's like a zoo
Looking for someone to give love to.
What's a kindred soul to do?
Looking for someone to give love to.
Tired of dodging all that flak
Take my love and give some back!
Ain't there anybody who
Is looking for someone to give love to?
© Copyright 1999 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-05-99 06:53 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

There's always a heart looking to be loved ...it's finding the one open enough to receive it that's the trick!

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Sunshine
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2 posted 09-05-99 06:58 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Seems like Ron's next job is to add sound, and you may then add the tempo. Good work, as always.
Kelly
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3 posted 09-05-99 07:28 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

I sure wish I could here you sing this? It's great.
Balladeer
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4 posted 09-05-99 07:30 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Take my word for it, Kelly. You don't. I sound like the Budweiser frogs!
Craig
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5 posted 09-05-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Bud wise ur

This is a definite number 1 hit!
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 09-05-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Balladeer
to love you is something
I think one would fear
for if I cared
and you let me go
where would all I feel go?

To love is sheer magic
to feel
to express
such emotion
is beyond compare
to be as two
but then as one
leaves a heart
in such despair
but one has to admit
such a love
is so very rare....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Denise
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7 posted 09-05-99 07:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Although you say you can not sing

Such melodies with words you bring
Oh Balladeer, just know one thing
No tune could ever be as grand...
Grand as the gems writ by your hand!


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Denise
Nan
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8 posted 09-05-99 07:57 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You know I'll always sing with you, Deer...

......Rib-bit......Rib-bit




[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-05-99).]
Starith
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9 posted 09-05-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Balladeer,

You have done it again...how and where do you come up with these things? You may sing like the budwiser frogs..but your words flow beautifully.

Starith

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!

Raspberme
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10 posted 09-05-99 09:02 PM       View Profile for Raspberme   Email Raspberme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Raspberme's Home Page   View IP for Raspberme

pretty awesome! u know how u feel, even i may be a little young. hey, that ryhmed!

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Raspberme
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11 posted 09-05-99 09:08 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

WOW!! What comments!!!

Rainbow...there are no answers to your words

Denise...any praise from you makes me glow

Nan......Your lithium perscription needs to be refilled. You are AWESOME!

Starith...I thank you

Raspberme...you got a great future!
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 09-05-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
I think it would be fun to ride the tail of this comet. So I'll add my well done.
hoot_owl_rn
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How can I post to this one
It's as if you read my mind
I spend my days in searching
But it's never love I find
I have so much to give
I don't know what to do
So I spend my life looking
for someone to give love to
I know that out there somewhere
Waits my own soul mate
I only hope I find him
Before it is too late

Well written Balladeer!!!


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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
WhtDove
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Well Balladeer, we find ourselves sailing in the same boat! Another masterpiece!
LOL...I liked those Bud-Wise-Er Frogs!
Poet deVine
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What is a song but poetry without the music? This is such a lonely song, Balladeer - and of course it's your wonderful talent showing through here!
Justbleu
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16 posted 09-05-99 11:49 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Balladeer I think I would also like to hear that to music.

When one does find such love you speak of.
That person is in awe of the beauty they now see.
Nothing more they would rather have than to be happy as can be.

This is the second writing I've read of yours!!! Well, Done!!!!


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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
moonmoon
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As always...AWESOME Sir...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr


Kelly
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18 posted 09-06-99 03:32 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

If you mean your voice is rough or raspy, well then, I'll love it. Besides I like the Budweiser frogs.
~one voice~
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19 posted 09-06-99 03:38 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

What a beautiful ballad! Seems I'm not alone in my own frustration!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Michael
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All I can say is you're awesome, Balladeer.


Michael
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'Deer dear heart did you ever get anyone to supply the music, because I know where I can find a Melody   just waiting to go along with this.

Fabulous work 'Deer, utterly fabulous
and anothe goes into the 'Deer hall

Take care
love and warm stuff
Mushy
  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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awwwww...crying:
 
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