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A fill in poem and your on your own

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-05-99 04:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

A fill in poem and your on your own.

In the evenings early hours,
Float the smells of jasmine -------
Sweeps across in delicate rune,
In the light of a yellow ----
Grounds shadows sullen lingers,
Like the touch of lovers -------
And turns like player piano reams.
Where lays the quasi drifting ------
Like holes that player piano sound.
Or baying dogs where game is -----
Intensify the howls that fall
And single out the dogs that ----
High in the trees trembles the prey
He makes his final stand and ----
Momentary escape from harm.
With trembling heart in high -----
He woe's the shrinking of his birth,
His days and nights upon this -----
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Pepper
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1 posted 09-08-99 02:09 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I'm not a poet, but if I were I sure wouldn't want to miss this challenge!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
WhtDove
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2 posted 09-08-99 11:07 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well this was original! So many ways to be filled in! This was really neat! A poets mind in searching to make your rhyme complete!
Sunshine
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3 posted 09-08-99 11:23 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ah, that's it, Sy, a unique challenge!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-08-99 06:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper, WhtDove and Sunshine.
Thank you all for the comments. It would be interesting to me to see how some people would finish the blank lines?
Denise
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5 posted 09-08-99 06:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks alot Seymour, now you are going to go and make me have to THINK!! I'll try!

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6 posted 11-19-2009 01:57 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

This is a wonderful exercise - sharp as a tack he was.
 
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