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The sound of silence

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 09-05-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

As I talk these private thoughts
I listen to the silence
keys vibrating as I touch them
wondering if you feel them
I hear the sound of my voice
as I talk through worries felt
but wonder how they are received
and if the emotion is met
So much we try to say
so few ways to say it
Do you see my eyes sparkle?
or cry when I say how I feel?
if only there were keys
that spelt the real me
the warmth you try to give
as I try to make me real
to know I'm needing too

Now if only I made sense...LOL

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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1 posted 09-05-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Makes sense to me, Rainbow. There are times we wish that the feelings and emotions could just somehow drain down through our fingertips, permeate the keys we are striking and somehow be transported through cyberspace along with our words. Sometimes it happens....like now, in your poem.

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If people from Poland are Poles, are people from Holland Holes?



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RainbowGirl
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2 posted 09-05-99 04:41 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I guess without my voice
you hear the sound of me
sometimes we are lucky
to sound as we are seen

Thanks Balladeer..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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