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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-09-05 04:30 PM


As I talk these private thoughts
I listen to the silence
keys vibrating as I touch them
wondering if you feel them
I hear the sound of my voice
as I talk through worries felt
but wonder how they are received
and if the emotion is met
So much we try to say
so few ways to say it
Do you see my eyes sparkle?
or cry when I say how I feel?
if only there were keys
that spelt the real me
the warmth you try to give
as I try to make me real
to know I'm needing too

Now if only I made sense...LOL

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-05-99).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-09-05 04:34 PM


Makes sense to me, Rainbow. There are times we wish that the feelings and emotions could just somehow drain down through our fingertips, permeate the keys we are striking and somehow be transported through cyberspace along with our words. Sometimes it happens....like now, in your poem.

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If people from Poland are Poles, are people from Holland Holes?



[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 09-05-99).]

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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2 posted 1999-09-05 04:41 PM


I guess without my voice
you hear the sound of me
sometimes we are lucky
to sound as we are seen

Thanks Balladeer..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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