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tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

0 posted 1999-09-05 01:52 PM


I'll wait for you, for all of time
The highest mountains, I would climb
The raging rivers, knows not my wrath
The mighty desert, could not hold me back
Yes, ten thousand tears I would cry,
to have you standing by my side
The love I feel burns so deep,
this love inside, I'll always keep
Though you love me as you say,
in a friendship sort of way
It is patents that will see me through
And hopes of one day holding you
I will not rush the stars to shine
Or pick fruit unripened from the vine
Will not demand the grapes turn to wine
I shall nurture all I hold, wait, and hope,
for love to grow

© tori 1999

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.

© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-05 08:19 PM


tori, this is absolutely beautiful. Very lovely indeed! )

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Denise

tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
2 posted 1999-09-05 09:10 PM


Thank you so much dsnyder!

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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-09-05 11:35 PM


Great one Tori! I loved it! Where ya been?
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-06 12:26 PM


I loved this a lot. It brought tears to my eyes because it reminds me of somone who doesn't want me to forget!!!
Thank You!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

tori
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
5 posted 1999-09-06 01:04 AM


Thanks WhtDove... I've been working, working and then some..lol
I'm glad it touched a cord Justbleu, you can thank my son for this one..:-)
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
vlh.



[This message has been edited by tori (edited 09-06-99).]

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