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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She is She is no angel in disguise. Fly's but not with gossamer rise. She paints no portraits of pretense Haunts no twilight zone of suspense. Ghosts no themes or moonlight harrow. Does not ride the vague of shadow. Nor does she promise endless joy. Or toy with me in playful ploy. She's there as solid as can be, With all her glad and misery. And I touch her more the more, As the years slide by, each score. She strokes and turns something within. Something genuine and sovereign. She walks me, the abyss of fear. And holds my hand cries tear for tear. Abridges my dread of the blur And for that alone, I'd love her. She's half of our histories story But deserves most of the glory. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great Seymour! I thoroughly enjoyed this one! ------------------ Denise |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A fine tribute to your other half, Seymour. A thoroughly enjoyable work I may add. Flows well, captures the heart. Michael |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
This is what true love is all about. "She's half of our history" says it all. Wonderful poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dsnyder, Michael and Sue, I thank you kindly for the glow. Your read, comments and halo. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...what a nice tribute. Thank you for posting ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
wow, you expressed that sence of "better half" so well. thank you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot and der Keit, What can I say after I say I thank you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You do Isabelle proud with this one, Sy.....  |
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Starith Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176Leesburg, FL USA |
Beautiful...I can say no more...words can not truly express the beauty of this piece. ------------------ We are only truly apperciated after we are no more! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Very well written Seymour.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Starith and moonmoon, To me the highest praise is the poets praise You do me honor. |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
Lovely I envy her |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Oh, dear Seymour, how much you are missed. Do you know? This was so beautiful! Sending my love across time and space. Margherita  |
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