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Lucie
Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-09-05 12:09 PM


When I come here to Passions its not the structure that I see
I try to read between the lines of all the poetry.
Its not your rhyme or meter that interest me most
its the feelings and the lives I see in each and every post.

The stories of the love you lost the feelings that you felt
all the pain of growing up, must admit make my heart melt.
I think more then half the poets here that open up their soul,
post here just to post here, recognition’s not their goal.

Its nice to get responses to the heartfelt words you write
and then in turn respond to others you read here late at night.
Seems the most common word we use to describe this is... addiction.
I can’t speak for others but I find this no affliction.

I enjoy my times spent here, and enjoy the things I read
just like a daily vitamin it gives me everything I need.
Love and life and laughter, and the things that I adore,
so please don’t stop the posting.. cause this addict fiends for more.


© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-09-05 12:23 PM


Lucie,
Hear hear it's quite clear.
Your poem has passed the test
and as far as I'm concerned
It is your very best.

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-05 01:31 PM


Exactly how I feel Lucie! I couldn't have said it better!

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Denise

Sue
Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
3 posted 1999-09-05 01:34 PM


I'm with you all the way, Lucie.
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-09-05 01:38 PM


Well done, Lucie.


Michael

Wesley the Blue
Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
5 posted 1999-09-05 01:39 PM


Im just starting my "adiction" and I already know that this is where I will be spending alot of my online time. Thanks for the great poem.
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 1999-09-05 01:41 PM


ditto

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-09-05 05:03 PM


My name is Ruth...I have been an addict of passions for 6 months or more now. I can not go on without my daily fix.
Nicely done Lucie

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
8 posted 1999-09-05 09:58 PM


Hey Ruth - that's the opening line of my article in the newsletter..... too funny
Nice job, Lucie.....

Hey Lucie...You're Ho-ome.....

Starith
Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA
9 posted 1999-09-06 12:01 PM


Ok, Ok I've tried to fight it but I can't...I must admit that my addiction is growing stronger everyday...I sign on to check my mail and find this on my way.

Nice poem...I think it describes most of us who come to the forums.

Starith

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!


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