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Addicted to You

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Lucie
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since 06-20-99
Posts 1123
Houston


0 posted 09-05-99 12:09 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

When I come here to Passions its not the structure that I see
I try to read between the lines of all the poetry.
Its not your rhyme or meter that interest me most
its the feelings and the lives I see in each and every post.

The stories of the love you lost the feelings that you felt
all the pain of growing up, must admit make my heart melt.
I think more then half the poets here that open up their soul,
post here just to post here, recognitionís not their goal.

Its nice to get responses to the heartfelt words you write
and then in turn respond to others you read here late at night.
Seems the most common word we use to describe this is... addiction.
I canít speak for others but I find this no affliction.

I enjoy my times spent here, and enjoy the things I read
just like a daily vitamin it gives me everything I need.
Love and life and laughter, and the things that I adore,
so please donít stop the posting.. cause this addict fiends for more.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
Posts 32119
Tamarac Fla


1 posted 09-05-99 12:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lucie,
Hear hear it's quite clear.
Your poem has passed the test
and as far as I'm concerned
It is your very best.
Denise
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since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


2 posted 09-05-99 01:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Exactly how I feel Lucie! I couldn't have said it better!

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Denise
Sue
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since 08-04-99
Posts 407
France


3 posted 09-05-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

I'm with you all the way, Lucie.
Michael
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since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


4 posted 09-05-99 01:38 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well done, Lucie.


Michael
Wesley the Blue
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since 09-02-99
Posts 430
Forest Lake, MN, USA


5 posted 09-05-99 01:39 PM       View Profile for Wesley the Blue   Email Wesley the Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wesley the Blue

Im just starting my "adiction" and I already know that this is where I will be spending alot of my online time. Thanks for the great poem.
Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

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6 posted 09-05-99 01:41 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

ditto

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


7 posted 09-05-99 05:03 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

My name is Ruth...I have been an addict of passions for 6 months or more now. I can not go on without my daily fix.
Nicely done Lucie

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


8 posted 09-05-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey Ruth - that's the opening line of my article in the newsletter..... too funny
Nice job, Lucie.....

Hey Lucie...You're Ho-ome.....
Starith
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since 08-18-99
Posts 181
Leesburg, FL USA


9 posted 09-06-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Ok, Ok I've tried to fight it but I can't...I must admit that my addiction is growing stronger everyday...I sign on to check my mail and find this on my way.

Nice poem...I think it describes most of us who come to the forums.

Starith

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