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Missing You |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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MISSING YOU I miss the way you speak to me. I miss the love you shared. The way you pulled me from the dark When I was sure that no one cared. I miss the glimmer in your eyes, The softness of your touch. And all those little things I need - I know I shouldn't need so much. I miss the way we played together Like two children sharing a dream. The way you always opened me up And set my emotion astream. I miss the soundness of a sleep Cradled in your embrace. I miss the lullaby you sang to me, You fingers lightly brushing my face. The way the world fades away When your soul dances with mine. The way I give you everything, The way you lay it on the line. The way you question where I came from When there's no denying it's true. I am the other half of your soul - Seeking completeness in you. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Oh Michael... this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!! It brought tears to my eyes... I enjoy your work so very much... Reading your poetry is like watching "Gone With The Wind..." I need a box of kleenex and someone to share the moment with! Thank you for sharing that wonderful talent of yours! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Michael, this is such a beautiful poem.So beautifully written, thank you for sharing  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Micheal...I believe it is truly her loss ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hauntingly beautiful..... your talent amazes me! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Incredibly beautiful...really tugs at the heart. Great piece...a lovely read. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very beautiful indeed.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Michael, I knew there was a soft side to that Dark heart, as soft as the kiss of a razor out of the dark. I trust your Lady sees that as well. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You absolutely never disappoint me, my dear... |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Sweetly sad ... thank you for sharing ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
You have left me speechless....and in awe at the beauty in this - what can I say to even TRY to explain to you how reading this made me feel ? I'll just sit here awhile and think of how lucky I am to be a part of you, in our poetry...I am so honored. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Micheal, I'm lucky to have found this one... " I am the other half to your soul" I's just how I felt in Souls Lament.Not one of my happier pieces ): either by the way... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's my favorite line as well! Very lovely piece, Michael! ------------------ Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I read this again today, circumstances different, and nearly cry. I can't wait until I have a chance to talk to you....I have so much I'd like to say...okay, so now I'm crying as I sit here....I better go before I drench my keyboard......your words are my sunshine, Michael. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Tisha Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 12Weedsport, NY |
Your words are very powerful. they speak my thoughts, especially with being in a longdistance love relationship. Thank you for a warm moment |
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