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Michael
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0 posted 09-05-99 04:39 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

MISSING YOU

I miss the way you speak to me.
I miss the love you shared.
The way you pulled me from the dark
When I was sure that no one cared.

I miss the glimmer in your eyes,
The softness of your touch.
And all those little things I need -
I know I shouldn't need so much.

I miss the way we played together
Like two children sharing a dream.
The way you always opened me up
And set my emotion astream.

I miss the soundness of a sleep
Cradled in your embrace.
I miss the lullaby you sang to me,
You fingers lightly brushing my face.

The way the world fades away
When your soul dances with mine.
The way I give you everything,
The way you lay it on the line.

The way you question where I came from
When there's no denying it's true.
I am the other half of your soul -
Seeking completeness in you.
© Copyright 1999 Michael Anderson - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 09-05-99 06:07 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oh Michael... this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!! It brought tears to my eyes... I enjoy your work so very much... Reading your poetry is like watching "Gone With The Wind..." I need a box of kleenex and someone to share the moment with! Thank you for sharing that wonderful talent of yours!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Dark Angel
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2 posted 09-05-99 06:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Michael, this is such a beautiful poem.So beautifully written, thank you for sharing
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-05-99 08:32 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Micheal...I believe it is truly her loss

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Poet deVine
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4 posted 09-05-99 09:40 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hauntingly beautiful..... your talent amazes me!
caroline
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5 posted 09-05-99 09:48 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Incredibly beautiful...really tugs at the heart. Great piece...a lovely read.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Pepper
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6 posted 09-05-99 09:49 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

very beautiful indeed....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
DreamEvil
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7 posted 09-06-99 05:19 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Michael,
I knew there was a soft side to that Dark heart, as soft as the kiss of a razor out of the dark. I trust your Lady sees that as well.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvilŠ


Nan
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8 posted 09-06-99 08:16 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You absolutely never disappoint me, my dear...
Skyfyre
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9 posted 09-06-99 10:53 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Sweetly sad ... thank you for sharing

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")


poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 09-07-99 02:51 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You have left me speechless....and in awe at the beauty in this - what can I say to even TRY to explain to you how reading this made me feel ? I'll just sit here awhile and think of how lucky I am to be a part of you, in our poetry...I am so honored.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


JennyLee
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11 posted 09-12-99 02:08 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Micheal,
I'm lucky to have found this one...
" I am the other half to your soul"
I's just how I felt in Souls Lament.Not one of my happier pieces ): either by the way...
Denise
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12 posted 09-12-99 02:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

That's my favorite line as well! Very lovely piece, Michael!

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Denise
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13 posted 09-12-99 03:36 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I read this again today, circumstances different, and nearly cry. I can't wait until I have a chance to talk to you....I have so much I'd like to say...okay, so now I'm crying as I sit here....I better go before I drench my keyboard......your words are my sunshine, Michael.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Tisha
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14 posted 09-12-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for Tisha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tisha

Your words are very powerful.

they speak my thoughts, especially with being in a longdistance love relationship. Thank you for a warm moment
 
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