Glen Hope, PA USA
In the grand scheme of things...this was a pretty good piece of work
One suggestion though....to improve the flow of it, I myself would break the final line
"and even in the grand scheme of things, that is all that matters"
and even in the grand scheme of things,
that is all that matters
Not only would this improve the flow, but it would also accentuate the all important last line of this poem and really bring the message through
"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald