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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-09-05 01:01 AM


Imortal words I do not write
Lost to the ages, gone from sight
Overlooked by the pass of time
Verses are lost, its not a crime
Every one has a poets heart
All people can master the art
But so few do we remember
Rarer than is true loves ember
All these words that from my pen flow
Shall all my hearts emotions show
Eternity will not recall
Every word that from my lips fall
Later years wont remember me
In all the word I write for thee
Gifts for you from within my heart

© Copyright 1999 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-09-05 01:05 AM


Very Very beautiful, my friend. It's true that your words may not be remembered, but if they touched someone, then the effort was well worth it. Exellent work.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 1999-09-05 01:11 AM


Lovely poem! There is more to this than meets the eye at first glance...a wonderful tribute to your love!

Wesley the Blue
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3 posted 1999-09-05 01:18 AM


Thank you both for you kind compliments.
Former Football
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4 posted 1999-09-05 02:05 AM


words may be overlooked and lost, but meanings stay true forever.... Remeber that, der keit
Foot

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the true sign of a
thinker is not the sound,
but the silence.

Former Football
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5 posted 1999-09-05 02:06 AM


words may be overlooked and lost, but meanings stay true forever.... Remeber that, der keit
Foot

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the true sign of a
thinker is not the sound,
but the silence.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-09-05 09:23 AM


Wonderful!! What more can one ask for than true words from the heart, their gift is more precious than gold

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
7 posted 1999-09-05 09:59 PM


just thought I would put this back at the top to see if anyone else had anything to say.
Starith
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since 1999-08-18
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Leesburg, FL USA
8 posted 1999-09-05 11:55 PM


Der,

Always remember this...your words maybe lost...but the inspirations they give are remembered forever.

Starith

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!



[This message has been edited by Starith (edited 09-05-99).]

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