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Mourning Glory

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-05-99 12:19 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

In the meadow by the valley,
under the sea,
is where we stood,
looking upon love and its glory,
or maybe the better word is gory,
for now she lies under the molten sea,
waiting for me,
i hurt her more,
without a touch,
then a whisper,
wild and silent,
speak no more to me,
ive lost the world today,
to get it back i would tempt my sanity



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Another good one. Very sad with a feeling of despair. You capture these emotions well.

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this is great. it made me so sad. I especially liked the play on the words "glory" and "gory" Keep it up
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