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The Keeper Of Keys
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0 posted 09-05-99 12:14 AM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

It comes to me in my sleep
Vivid colors violently twisted
Yet plesantly neat

Dark mists rising from the floor
Heavy fog
As if from the storytellers lore

Unknown to all but me
My retreat and escape
This is my dream


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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

© Copyright 1999 The Keeper Of Keys - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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1 posted 09-05-99 08:13 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Okay, I can't say as I disliked this...but to me it seems unfinished. I understand that dreams can be an escape from reality, but I am left to wonder after reading this, what comes to you in your sleep?

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-05-99 11:02 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot is right but you have a good start.
Denise
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3 posted 09-05-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

"Unknown to all but me". I think that says it all!! Very good!

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Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


4 posted 09-15-99 06:45 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I liked that a lot!!! I just plain really enjoy your writing!!! Hmm..where have I heard those words before??

Justbleu

Keep it up Mr. Keys!!

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
passing shadows
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5 posted 04-23-2004 01:54 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice
Artic Wind
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6 posted 11-11-2007 12:33 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

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