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Wake me

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-05-99 12:12 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i cant believe she loves me,
cant believe she cares,
cant believe the stars in her eyes,
whenever im there,
and since i cant believe,
i begin to doubt,
start to wonder what this love is truly about,
she cant love me,
she cant care,
im no one,
just a waste of air,
she must be a dream,
im tempted to scream,
wake me this is cruel,
im always the loving,desperate fool



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1 posted 09-05-99 12:16 AM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

I love this, this is so well put and yet so simply understood. Beautiful.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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