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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-05 12:12 PM


i cant believe she loves me,
cant believe she cares,
cant believe the stars in her eyes,
whenever im there,
and since i cant believe,
i begin to doubt,
start to wonder what this love is truly about,
she cant love me,
she cant care,
im no one,
just a waste of air,
she must be a dream,
im tempted to scream,
wake me this is cruel,
im always the loving,desperate fool



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The Keeper Of Keys
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 39

1 posted 1999-09-05 12:16 PM


I love this, this is so well put and yet so simply understood. Beautiful.

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


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