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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-04 11:53 PM


i wither you see,
i dry up,
in time,
too much misery alone,
she was my water,
my air ,
my sunshine,
and now its night,
no one to care,
for me,
you see,
my day never comes,
my pain the only one,
to keep me company,
the lump,
they call confidence,
is lost with me,
do you see,
or are you another enemy



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© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Wolfgang
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since 1999-05-24
Posts 124
Hamilton, Ont. Canada
1 posted 1999-09-05 12:10 PM


Concider me friendly and, I like what I see!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-05 08:11 AM


Wow...your talents amaze me. I think I like this better than any posting I've read from you so far and I've liked them all

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-09-05 03:45 PM


The Jackal,
I agree with Wolfgang.

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