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Self Made Pit

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-04-99 09:58 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

From my self made pit,
i watch the picture perfect,
walk right by,
taking pictures of happiness,
in their eye,
im so jealous,
so very jealous,
i cant crawl out,
be part of their picture,
but its too deep,
in here,
you see i fear,
the risk,
live with the regrets,
that stains,
and drains,
my power,
my pleasure,
the picture is fading,
and my pit is closing,
is it my eye,taken from time,
tell me please,
then leave me among the leaves,
where pictures breathe,
new life into me



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1 posted 09-04-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

how long does it take you to write these? You can really pop them out!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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