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Quicksand

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-04-99 09:48 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

the last thing she said,
as she lay so quiet,
so dead,
was never let anyone bring you down,
it was hard to live with her,
harder to stay afloat,
in this moat,
almost like quicksand,
this all brings me down,
to where it lies,
it needs no description,
its there you see,
no perhaps you dont,
because your not guilty like me,
and im falling below,
the sand,
too late to help,
im not worth it anyway,
take her pain ,
keep it safe,
i might want it back someday



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1 posted 09-04-99 09:51 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

you did it again! Can I have permission to share your poetry with outhers?

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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