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Life is Pretend

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-04-99 08:22 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

what was i thinking
or dreaming so clear
why did i believe
i belonged here
was i ever really normal
did I fit in the perfect circle
life is pretend
it was my friend
i kept it close
because i didnt trust
now...now everything is rust
stain of me
stain of you
do we all feel the blue
it lives,breathes
reproduces
once..once i was new
not a gentle monster
not a change
just a weeping willow
ravaged by the rain



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1 posted 09-04-99 08:27 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Ok, you know have a groupie on your hands......it's your own fault, for writing so good. Oh, did I mention I like your stuff? hee hee

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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2 posted 03-24-2009 02:07 AM       View Profile for ramisf   Email ramisf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ramisf

Life is great... we need to know how, where, and for what we are living it.... we need to set a goal and work hard to get it
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