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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-04-99 08:14 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

to let you go
it will kill me i know
but your better off
to let you shine
never mine
such hopes we had
wishing on that star
it reaches so far
like the glint in her eyes
i never saw
the wonder of it all
and shes better without me
fogging up the view
which i hope she
shares with someone bright
someone new




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Saxoness
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1 posted 09-04-99 08:16 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Hey, I'm bording on obbsession here, so you had better just quit writing so good before you have a groupie on your hands. lol

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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hoot_owl_rn
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beautifully stated but incredibly sad

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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Definitely a poem to make one think. How many of us, knowing we are holding one back, are willing to let them go to reach their full potential? We tame horses, don't we?
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