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questions, i guess that im to affriad to ask????????

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amber
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0 posted 09-04-99 07:22 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

does your future,
dwell softly in my eyes,
an unconditonal love,
without comprimise?

could you spend every morning,
in only my embrace,
feeling my kisses,
brush lightly across your face?

will all the confusion,
wear you down over time,
or is it true that forever,
youll be only mine?

can i take for granted,
all the insecurities i have,
trusting you, and loving you,
is all ive ever had.

is it possible to know,
that in me lies happiness,
without a doubt in your soul,
or a second guess in your kiss?

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-04-99 07:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is quite lovely amber. I very much enjoyed this!

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amber
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2 posted 09-04-99 07:44 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you very much, i havent been exactly flowing to much on the happy note lately, so im glad you enjoyed this poem. wish i felt more like this at the moment.
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3 posted 09-04-99 07:49 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I enjoyed it too. Questions we all ask, i believe. you put them into words nicely.

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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