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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-09-04 07:04 PM

So, I Imagiine

Day after Day
Feels like a grey cloud over my head
I curl up like a ball when I go to bed
Night after Night
I dream only of you as I sleep
And when I wake, I weep
and I know I'm going insane
Cause my days just aren't the same
For you're not there beside me
Tell me, what am I to do?
Cause you make my grey skies blue
So, I Imagine -
The sun is the warmth you give
and your beautiful smile
The rainsdrops are your tears of Joy
The warm breezes
are your soft caresses
The colourful flowers
Is the beauty I see in you
The stars shining brightly
means you're watching over me
So, I will pretend
All the nature around me
That I feel, see and go through
IS YOU!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-04 07:13 PM

Beautifully written Dark Angel.....if it's any consulation, time does heal.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 1999-09-04 08:25 PM

good one, i realte this to having to leave my parents.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-09-04 08:36 PM

So sad! Good poem though! I've done my share of pretending....it's definitely not as nice as the real thing!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-09-04 08:59 PM

This is beautiful, so filled with emotion. I can definitely relate to this one.

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Denise

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 1999-09-05 04:51 AM

Thank you all for your lovley comments

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-09-05 06:13 AM

I found this a lovely poem tinged with an unappeasable sadness, Dark Angel. Great work here, indeed.

Michael

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-09-05 03:49 PM

Dark angel,
Thinking like that will get you everwhere.
Nice job

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 1999-09-06 12:40 PM

Michael, thank you

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Seymour, lets hope it does

and thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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