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So,I Imagine

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-04-99 07:04 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

So, I Imagiine


Day after Day
Feels like a grey cloud over my head
I curl up like a ball when I go to bed
Night after Night
I dream only of you as I sleep
And when I wake, I weep
and I know I'm going insane
Cause my days just aren't the same
For you're not there beside me
Tell me, what am I to do?
Cause you make my grey skies blue
So, I Imagine -
The sun is the warmth you give
and your beautiful smile
The rainsdrops are your tears of Joy
The warm breezes
are your soft caresses
The colourful flowers
Is the beauty I see in you
The stars shining brightly
means you're watching over me
So, I will pretend
All the nature around me
That I feel, see and go through
IS YOU!
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-04-99 07:13 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully written Dark Angel.....if it's any consulation, time does heal.
Saxoness
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2 posted 09-04-99 08:25 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

good one, i realte this to having to leave my parents.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Poet deVine
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3 posted 09-04-99 08:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

So sad! Good poem though! I've done my share of pretending....it's definitely not as nice as the real thing!
Denise
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4 posted 09-04-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, so filled with emotion. I can definitely relate to this one.

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Denise
Dark Angel
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5 posted 09-05-99 04:51 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you all for your lovley comments
Michael
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6 posted 09-05-99 06:13 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I found this a lovely poem tinged with an unappeasable sadness, Dark Angel. Great work here, indeed.

Michael
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Dark angel,
Thinking like that will get you everwhere.
Nice job
Dark Angel
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8 posted 09-06-99 12:40 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Michael, thank you

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Seymour, lets hope it does and thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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