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Power of your eyes

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-04-99 06:54 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

I could never forget
the power of your eyes
piercing right through
what i felt was untrue
the same old wind
blows this way again
and your hair glistens
with anticipation
no matter what way im facing
your eyes are all i see
staring through me
then we are one
indefinitely...



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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-04-99 07:15 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow...you post far too little for my satisfaction. This was a wonderfully written piece full of imagery and emotion.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Saxoness
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2 posted 09-04-99 08:14 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I agree with hoot owl. But, you caught me again! bravo

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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Justbleu
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3 posted 09-06-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

One, two, I make three!!!

Deep!!!


Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
Starith
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4 posted 09-06-99 12:12 AM       View Profile for Starith   Email Starith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starith

Wow...truly amazing piece...Bravo.

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miriam
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5 posted 09-06-99 12:19 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

great piece!!! waiting to read more from you.
Tyke
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6 posted 09-06-99 12:35 AM       View Profile for Tyke   Email Tyke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tyke's Home Page   View IP for Tyke

powerful thoughts very nicely put.
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the windows to the soul
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