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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-04 06:54 PM


I could never forget
the power of your eyes
piercing right through
what i felt was untrue
the same old wind
blows this way again
and your hair glistens
with anticipation
no matter what way im facing
your eyes are all i see
staring through me
then we are one
indefinitely...



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© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-04 07:15 PM


Wow...you post far too little for my satisfaction. This was a wonderfully written piece full of imagery and emotion.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Saxoness
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Senior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
2 posted 1999-09-04 08:14 PM


I agree with hoot owl. But, you caught me again! bravo

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 1999-09-06 12:09 PM


One, two, I make three!!!

Deep!!!


Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

Starith
Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 176
Leesburg, FL USA
4 posted 1999-09-06 12:12 PM


Wow...truly amazing piece...Bravo.

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We are only truly apperciated after we are no more!


miriam
Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
5 posted 1999-09-06 12:19 PM


great piece!!! waiting to read more from you.
Tyke
Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26
Calgary, Alberta, Canada
6 posted 1999-09-06 12:35 PM


powerful thoughts very nicely put.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-04-16 11:51 PM


the windows to the soul
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