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If I had dragon wings

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Seymour Tabin
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If I had dragon wings

I'd hover o'er the why of things
If only I had dragon wings.
I would fly in a thoughtful muse
And give the things that all could use.

I'd be the giver and tender
Reigning ruler and pretender.
Season the cauldron with good taste
Eliminate the awful waste.

I'd ring out war and ring in peace.
I'd make each gender sign a lease.
And blow on them with fires cruel
If they did not obey the rule.

I'd hold a court for every need
And listen well to every plead.
For those that lie they'd pay a toll
A piece of their eternal soul.

I'd make the stars rain wished on things,
If only I had dragon wings.
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Pepper
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1 posted 09-04-99 05:32 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

again Bravo

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
IsabelleSkye
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2 posted 09-04-99 05:37 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Ohhhhh this was awesome. Makes me wish I had thought of this and written it!
Luv Izzzzzzzy
Denise
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3 posted 09-04-99 05:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like Utopia!! Great one Seymour!
(but that's no real surprise!)

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-04-99 07:21 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could solve all the worlds problems? I like this one
Saxoness
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5 posted 09-04-99 07:33 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Well, if we can't have a real utopia, we can at least find it in your writings, I think. good job

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I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-04-99 10:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

To all the above you have my love, each comment offers a moment. Which to me is sheer enjoy.
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7 posted 09-04-99 10:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sy, as you know, I've read a lot of your poetry and this is, by far, the best thing you've written, in my humble opinion.
caroline
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8 posted 09-05-99 12:54 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Seymour, this is just wonderful! It is a smile from beginning to end.

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Sue
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9 posted 09-05-99 01:03 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Great one!
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 09-05-99 08:57 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
Your humble opinion is good enough for me.
Caroline and Sue,
So glad you both enjoyed the poem.
thank you so much.
Nan
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11 posted 09-05-99 09:46 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Yeah Sy......
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 09-05-99 09:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Why thank you Nan, that looks just like me.
moonmoon
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Well written Sey, Great job..
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 09-06-99 08:43 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Moonmoon,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
U K Hero
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15 posted 09-06-99 01:22 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

were do you get them from.. its great

not to sure about the last two line's though!
I'd make the stars..etc
Justbleu
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16 posted 09-15-99 07:31 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was cool...I am a fan of dragons anywayz!!

I enjoyed it very much!!

Thank You!!

Justbleu

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Justbleu

Seymour Tabin
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U K Hero and Justblue,
Thank you so much for the read and comments.
As I said before when I put a poem to sleep
I like to be the last to tuck it in goodbye.
nakdthoughts
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18 posted 01-28-2008 07:24 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

"If only I had dragon wings."

You've earned your wings, Sy
In Memory...

M
 
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