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Life, Love and Stars in the Eyes

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Wesley the Blue
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since 09-02-99
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0 posted 09-04-99 12:54 PM       View Profile for Wesley the Blue   Email Wesley the Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wesley the Blue

At the end of the day
Looking down on life
Wonderng "what love is"j
Seeing it in the blue and black
Seeing it in the stars
Deep within the eyes

With upward turned eyes
When it is no more day
Looking in between the stars
Searching through life
Answers hidden in the black
Telling all about love

How is it that we see love
With our four eyes
Up in that murky black
Hidden by the light of day
Hidden like life
Only in the stars

So what say the stars
On matters of love
On matters of llife
Deep within the eyes
That I long for every day
In that inviting blue and black

In that blue and black
I see the stars
In the night or in the day
I see that wich I love
In your eyes
I see my life

With you in my life
Alone against the black
Alone within your eyes
Writen in the stars
Is my love
Forever and a day
© Copyright 1999 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


1 posted 09-05-99 01:14 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

You know I love this...exellent, exellent work. As I've said before, you have awesome talent.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


2 posted 09-06-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Your poem reminds me of Twilight, that brief time between night and day!!!

I enjoyed it!!

Justbleu

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!
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