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My garden of the mind

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Seymour Tabin
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My garden of the Mind

She would leave my garden.
My castle of charms illusions.
Roam in catacombs time.
Rub noses with the mundane day.
Stay pasture with the flock.
Bruise upon the rocks of chaos.

The impede could not plant,
Seeds of comparison enough,
To nullify her need.
Love could not build walls high enough,
To contain her freedom.
Nor could it waylay or stop time.

Times ravage continues
And I wished to veil the mirrors
Empathies her beauty
Surround her with a web of grace
Cherish her with embrace
But all the strings martyred wrong for
Love rings a double bong.

Loving must honor each instruct
Yet within us all, lays destruct.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-04-99).]
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Wolfgang
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1 posted 09-04-99 02:53 PM       View Profile for Wolfgang   Email Wolfgang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wolfgang's Home Page   View IP for Wolfgang

Seymour. I am really getting a double bong from your last two lines and either one seems correct.
"Within us all lies"...(as in LAIN)
or
"Within us all lies"... (as in LIED)
Oh what a dilemma I am in.

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-04-99 04:01 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully done

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-04-99 05:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wolfgang,
Don't we all slip when we lie?
Made correction.
thanks for the read and correct.
I understand your delemma.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 09-04-99).]
Wolfgang
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4 posted 09-04-99 05:41 PM       View Profile for Wolfgang   Email Wolfgang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wolfgang's Home Page   View IP for Wolfgang

Ah shucks Seymour!
You solved the problem for me.
Now what am I going to do for the rest of the day?
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-04-99 10:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wolfgang,
Well you can do what I do.
Sometimes I shift to painting although I haven't done much of that lately.
Hoot,
Thanks for the read and comment.
Nan
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...and I missed the whole thing...
I Went and laid down on the job again!!
passing shadows
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loved this one
 
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