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passioner New Member
since 1999-09-04
Posts 3 |
From Nan - Does anyone recognize this poem as the work of another? - passioner, kindly revise your profile and submit a valid email address - Thank you Pieces of the sky lay along the wet asphalt As if the brutal beauty above had sprung a leak Champagne blush painted the gathering omnipotent clouds Seemingly modest of their powerful intensity The placid sky turned lively A strobe light playing exultingly Accompanied by the roars of some frustrated god Wishing to be heard The ephemeral bursts of shock white Illuminated a face in the window, Eyes highlighted with a rainy sheen Moist lips in a melancholy curve The reflection was sharply swept away The burning out of the bleached light stealing it cunningly The sky darkened conspiciuously, Strangely emblematic of her mood, Drenching out the last outreaching rays of sun, Unwanted as they were special nothing [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-04-99).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passioner, Enjoyed the poem but I think I might have used bleaching instead of drenching in the last stanza. |
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