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The Nightmare

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Angel Rand
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0 posted 09-04-99 04:12 AM       View Profile for Angel Rand   Email Angel Rand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angel Rand

I dreamt again last night,
Of wild and angry seas,
Of storms and all their might,
That forced me to my knees.

Beloved cliffs no more,
A gloomy place of death,
With poisoned air and gore,
To trap me by my breath.

But for my love of light,
My heart ablaze with pain,
Braved yet another fight,
Which never seems in vain.

Yet smashed down on the floor
My face is wet with tears,
I've lost another war,
Too many through the years.

I dreamt again last night,
Of wild and angry seas,
Of storms and all their might,
That forced me to my knees.

Angel
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-04-99 08:32 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Angel this poem was very well written...the use of symbolism in it worked very well. Nicely done!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
caroline
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2 posted 09-04-99 09:18 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Angel, good job here. I like the way it flows, and I agree with hoot...good symbolism.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Angel Rand
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3 posted 09-04-99 09:54 AM       View Profile for Angel Rand   Email Angel Rand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel Rand

TY Hoot and Caroline! I am new to the poetry writing world so your words are a great encouragement.
You made my day
Angel
Denise
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4 posted 09-05-99 12:12 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Angel, I loved this. It was truly a pleasure to read!

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Denise
Angel Rand
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5 posted 09-05-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for Angel Rand   Email Angel Rand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel Rand

Ty Dsnyder! Glad you like it.
Angel
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