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My Child????????????

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amber
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0 posted 09-04-99 03:01 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

inside me there could be,
a child growing,
from our own reflections,
only to be lost in a world,
that is still misunderstood,
by us,
after all this time.

in my heart,
fear is welling,
that ive taken time for granted,
and forced you to do the same,
now im sorry to a man,
that hasnt lived his life yet.

in your mind,
questions are breeding,
and killing you to think,
that this child,
could tare you apart,
and your insecurities are unmeasurable.

inside me,
at this moment,
our mistakes could be becoming,
the most cherished thing,
weve ever dreamed to hold,
and still we cry together,
becuase fear makes us weak.

i stand before you,
empty handed,
with nothing but my love,
and something that may not exist,
and the tears in your eyes,
and the softness in your touch,
assure me,
that whatever comes of this,
ill never be alone.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 09-04-99 05:38 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

amber: this is touching...a child from love or from mistake...you are never alone.

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*shadowy-one*
hoot_owl_rn
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Very nicely written
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3 posted 09-04-99 11:15 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It was touching. Thank you for sharing, Amber.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

amber
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4 posted 09-04-99 02:41 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all for your comments, and taking the time to read my poem. its funny how fear reminds me of everything i hide from myself.
Justbleu
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5 posted 09-15-99 06:53 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Looks like an earlier piece...very touching!!

Thanks again!!

Justbleu

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