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Lost And Alone

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 09-04-99 02:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel



Walking along this ghastly Avenue
Scared, shaken, and searching for you
Never before had I felt so lost and alone
I was left stranded
In a place I've never known
I did not know which way to turn
So I walked forward
as far as my eyes could see
Calling out your name
and thinking how could you leave me
Suddenly, a message came to mind
which might be of some surprise to you
Never, in my life again
will I be able to trust you!!
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-04-99 02:03 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Works well for me, it echoes my feelings exactly at this point soul-sister.

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvilŠ

~one voice~
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2 posted 09-04-99 02:20 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

This is beautiful! I sort of feel this way also, right now. Would you mind if I printed this poem and hung it on my wall?

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."


Dark Angel
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3 posted 09-04-99 02:27 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

One Voice,Wow,I am blown away, thank you. I don't mind at all.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 09-04-99 07:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you Dream
WhtDove
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5 posted 09-04-99 02:05 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very well done dear! This is where we all have been one time or another! Confusion, loneliness, fear, you have brought these feelings through well!!!
Dark Angel
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6 posted 09-04-99 06:45 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you so much WhtDove
 
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