Member Rara Avis
Hello Tyke. Oh, the heartache of love gone cold... you have clearly expressed it here! You have employed some excellent lines such as "wathing rainbows through the rain/as the nights push out the days" and "I'm back to drinking whiskey" (twice, though?) and "standing on the edge of nowhere" (which echoes your title). I think this is longer than necessary to get across the message, though, IMHO. Even one edit by removing repeated thoughts and phrases could do it.
Oh, btw, I liked the line "I've found some comfort there" but I think you may have inadvertantly picked that out of a Paul Simon song.... maybe?? Sometimes I use a line from a song, too, by accident because I have so many of them floating around in my head.
All in all, a very nice effort here and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!