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The waterfall

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Seymour Tabin
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The Waterfall

Deep within a canyon sprawl,
Playing games, leap, splash and fall,
Living waters' dancing bright,
Shunting sun and sculpting light.

A picture of art to the eyes,
That makes for many heavy sighs.
With music to the listening ear,
Exploding, charming splashing cheer.

I love the lively bubbling dance,
Each movement one of purest chance
And when a sprinkle touches me,
I feel a sense of ecstasy.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-04-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful job, Seymour. I love waterfalls, especially the one you described in this poem! I may never see it and it may not even be real, but it exists in this piece. Bravo!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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Oh darn! I wish I wrote this one!

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Denise
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Beautiful...I love the water, and I saw it in this piece wonderfully.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

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4 posted 09-04-99 01:08 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

wonderful imagery Seymour! I like

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Seymour Tabin
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To all of the above,
You are the sunshine that sparkles on my water fall. thank you all.
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful Imagery

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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good description, i'm a new member, may you comment on my work?
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-05-99 04:01 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Thank you Hoot and passioner I certainly will comment on your work.
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another beautifully painted picture with words that you are so brilliant at achieving.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 09-05-99 09:52 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper,
Once again my thanks for your kind words
traveler
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Great post Sy, If I close my eyes I'll feel the water splashing down on my head ...thanks
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Sy, I've seen this, and you've brought it forth again. Well done. And, thanks for making "me" part of your replies to the well-deserved compliments!
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Geez, had a hard time finding the end of the replies here. LOL...This was beautiful! I am an outdoor lover, and I love the beauty of a waterfall! You have described it very well! Beautiful scene you have painted here!
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 09-07-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Traveler, Sunshine and WhtDove.
I thank all you three
With all of me.
 
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