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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-09-04 12:01 PM


The Waterfall

Deep within a canyon sprawl,
Playing games, leap, splash and fall,
Living waters' dancing bright,
Shunting sun and sculpting light.

A picture of art to the eyes,
That makes for many heavy sighs.
With music to the listening ear,
Exploding, charming splashing cheer.

I love the lively bubbling dance,
Each movement one of purest chance
And when a sprinkle touches me,
I feel a sense of ecstasy.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 1999-09-04 12:06 PM


Beautiful job, Seymour. I love waterfalls, especially the one you described in this poem! I may never see it and it may not even be real, but it exists in this piece. Bravo!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Denise
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2 posted 1999-09-04 12:08 PM


Oh darn! I wish I wrote this one!

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Denise

Alwye
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3 posted 1999-09-04 12:29 PM


Beautiful...I love the water, and I saw it in this piece wonderfully.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


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4 posted 1999-09-04 01:08 AM


wonderful imagery Seymour! I like

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 1999-09-04 09:43 AM


To all of the above,
You are the sunshine that sparkles on my water fall. thank you all.

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-09-04 10:07 AM


Beautiful Imagery

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

passioner
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7 posted 1999-09-04 10:14 AM


good description, i'm a new member, may you comment on my work?
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-09-05 04:01 PM


Thank you Hoot and passioner I certainly will comment on your work.
Pepper
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9 posted 1999-09-05 04:42 PM


another beautifully painted picture with words that you are so brilliant at achieving.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 1999-09-05 09:52 PM


Pepper,
Once again my thanks for your kind words

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11 posted 1999-09-07 09:22 AM


Great post Sy, If I close my eyes I'll feel the water splashing down on my head ...thanks
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12 posted 1999-09-07 11:08 AM


Sy, I've seen this, and you've brought it forth again. Well done. And, thanks for making "me" part of your replies to the well-deserved compliments!
WhtDove
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13 posted 1999-09-07 02:01 PM


Geez, had a hard time finding the end of the replies here. LOL...This was beautiful! I am an outdoor lover, and I love the beauty of a waterfall! You have described it very well! Beautiful scene you have painted here!
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 1999-09-07 02:57 PM


Traveler, Sunshine and WhtDove.
I thank all you three
With all of me.

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