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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-03 11:11 PM


Dearheart

You complete me

Your soul moves me

You hold me tightly in your heart

Like no other I've ever known

You are my star

You are my light

You're the one who brings joy into my life

I cannot contain this feeling

You've opened your heart to me

I hold your tender heart

In the palm of my hand

I dreamt of a love so true

I did not believe until I met you

You

My forever

My everything

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Hope to hear back from you!!

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-04 12:44 PM


So very romantic. I love this one!

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Denise

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-04 12:46 PM


It is one of two of my favorites!! It means a lot to me!! The title alone brings tears to my eyes!!

I am glad you liked it!!

Justbleu

Wesley the Blue
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3 posted 1999-09-04 12:55 PM


I have felt what you portray in your poem before, you describe it perfectly. Thank you for sharing.
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-22 12:11 PM


Thanks for telling me your thoughts!!!


Beki
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5 posted 1999-09-22 12:22 PM


very sweet....
Severn
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6 posted 1999-09-22 01:33 AM


Justbleu - mind if I borrow this gorgeous work - cause it so expresses my own feelings right now!
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 1999-09-22 04:14 AM


Well....let me see....as long as you return it later!!!

I think that is great about you 2!! Hehe

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"
Justbleu


Dark Angel
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8 posted 1999-09-22 07:45 AM


Justbleu, beautiful, loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 1999-09-22 07:56 AM


Thank You!!
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 1999-09-22 09:37 AM


Beautifully romantic

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

White Wolf
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since 1999-09-18
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
11 posted 1999-09-25 11:56 PM


Very well done. Who might have the honors of being the inspiration of this poem?

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"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
12 posted 1999-09-26 01:55 AM


My Dearheart of course!!!




Thank You Dragon One and Hoot!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



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