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Here is three quite short but sweet

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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-03-99 10:41 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I sensed her then
I sense her now
Nothing's changed
But, my mistakes
Did you think me blind??
That I couldn't see the love in your eyes
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An old shoe

A shoe brand new
Sparkling to the eye
Comfortable underneath
So wonderful to be
Yet,Time passes by
Once new now old
No longer useful
Holes and tears
Needing love and repairs
But, instead comes along
Another new shoe
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Is it real??
Is it not??
Does he love her??
Does he not??
Is she living in a dream??
Is she playing make-believe??
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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!


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Denise
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1 posted 09-03-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sweet! I like these!
WhtDove
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2 posted 09-03-99 11:47 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Neat little diddy's! And welcome to the forum.

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Justbleu
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3 posted 09-04-99 12:08 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You both!! This is a great place!!


Justbleu
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4 posted 06-24-2000 04:04 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

thanx for sharing these short gems with me...you are right...i did enjoy them...

like the "An Old Shoe" best...thought that the way you referred a relationship to the state of a shoe was unique and brilliant...loved these lines:

Holes and tears
Needing love and repairs
But, instead comes along
Another new show

yes, often when a relationship falls apart,we may not try out means and ways to salvage the relationship but instead let it collapse and fall for someone else....very accurate here

the last poem with the list of questions kind of remind me of a girl peeling off the petals of the rose, asking as she goes along:He loves me...He loves not....
feel the incessant doubt and questioning here

thanx for sharing,Justbleu
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5 posted 06-25-2000 06:25 AM       View Profile for dreamy_eyes   Email dreamy_eyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dreamy_eyes

Great poems!!!

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6 posted 06-25-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for dreamy_eyes   Email dreamy_eyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dreamy_eyes

It's not quantity it's quality & you definitely have that!  Love Deb    
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Justbleu
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7 posted 09-11-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Thank You!!!!!!  

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
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