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A Rose

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Justbleu
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0 posted 09-03-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

The Rose

Leaves alone

Fear unknown

Searching for the rose

Lost

Blackness draws near

Crashing through leaves

Warmth lies in shadows

Strange among these trees

Unfamiliar to the eye

A rose

Impossible to see

Secluded in an image

Beneath obscurity

Through the gloom

Fading from view

Slipping

Forever passed

Vanished

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"Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!!

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-03-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-04-99 12:55 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Justbleu. I really enjoyed this one too!

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Denise
Justbleu
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2 posted 09-22-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Cool!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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I liked this one

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DBeth
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4 posted 09-22-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Very nice Bleu!


DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.
Justbleu
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Thank You Both!!!

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WhtDove
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Not what I expected for a rose. But very nice nontheless!
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