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The Keeper Of Keys
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since 1999-09-02
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0 posted 1999-09-03 10:15 PM


If

I saw you dancing there
You thought nobody was watching

But I was

Now you've grown accustom to the audience
There isn't time for any encore performance these days

Your sweet movements remain in my mind
Your beauty captivates my breath, my heart, my existence

Share a kiss with me
Put your lips upon the heavens and taste purity

You'd never be alone
You'd feel no coldness from your pains
I'd warm your heart

If you were mine...

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~



[This message has been edited by The Keeper Of Keys (edited 09-03-99).]

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 1999-09-03 10:23 PM


You definately write beautifully!!
Thank You for sharing such words with us!!

Justbleu

The Keeper Of Keys
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since 1999-09-02
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2 posted 1999-09-03 11:46 PM


Thank You so much, if only i could get a bigger "audience".

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-09-04 12:36 PM


Be patient, people will come around.. Beautiful poem with nice sentiments! I enjoyed it!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 1999-09-04 12:38 PM


Don't get discouraged...someone told me this earlier!!! So I am passing it on too you!!

Justbleu

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