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The Keeper Of Keys
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0 posted 09-03-99 10:15 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

If

I saw you dancing there
You thought nobody was watching

But I was

Now you've grown accustom to the audience
There isn't time for any encore performance these days

Your sweet movements remain in my mind
Your beauty captivates my breath, my heart, my existence

Share a kiss with me
Put your lips upon the heavens and taste purity

You'd never be alone
You'd feel no coldness from your pains
I'd warm your heart

If you were mine...

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~



[This message has been edited by The Keeper Of Keys (edited 09-03-99).]
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Justbleu
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1 posted 09-03-99 10:23 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

You definately write beautifully!!
Thank You for sharing such words with us!!

Justbleu
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2 posted 09-03-99 11:46 PM       View Profile for The Keeper Of Keys   Email The Keeper Of Keys   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Keeper Of Keys

Thank You so much, if only i could get a bigger "audience".

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~^~^~The Keeper Of Keys~^~^~

To be nobody but yourself--In a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybody else--Means to fight the hardest battle any human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Be patient, people will come around.. Beautiful poem with nice sentiments! I enjoyed it!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Justbleu
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4 posted 09-04-99 12:38 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Don't get discouraged...someone told me this earlier!!! So I am passing it on too you!!

Justbleu
 
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